Biocrawler:Cleanup

June 11, 2005

• Pakistan - Britain Advisory Council looks like a collection of exactly two quotes, has no links and at least needs a clean up - unless vfd is a better solution. Andreww
• Jack Greenberg (lawyer) I converted the mess whereby his lks going to McD's CEO into a messy stub. See talk:Jack Greenberg (lawyer) Jerzy·t
• Thomson Learning - Spam. - Mike Rosoft 19:09, 11 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Aren't We Real - Vanity. - Mike Rosoft 19:20, 11 Jun 2005 (UTC)

June 10, 2005

• There is a user (or users, since there are different IP adresses doing this) that happens to be inserting fancruft on certain articles on female newscasters. This occurs in the articles of Daryn Kagan, Liz Claman, Maria Bartiromo and Lynne Russell. Someone should keep an eye on this. ErikNY 18:13, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Jumping through hyperlinks at random, Jumpsteady stood out because of its verifiable content being arranged in a very non-wikipedia format. I'm busy, if someone else could work on this, that'd be wonderful; if not, I'll take care of it when I can. jglc | t | c 16:54, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)

June 9, 2005

• Is there a connection between the first component of Baccarat, Meurthe-et-Moselle and the so named game? There should be a pointer from the former to the latter: also this page is getting rather long.
• Cordless iron I know nothing about the subject but the article looks a bit dodgy. I'm loathe to suggest it for deletion, however, as it is not my field. Keresaspa 14:49, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Sichuan_invasion — Did some cleaning up and corrections to grammar and spelling. Some facts still need verification.--Macdyne73 14:10, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Yorkshire Society — needs reformatting. Sarge Baldy 06:16, Jun 9, 2005 (UTC)
• Agiel — needs serious style and wiki love, almost Vfd, but has two albums, so benefit of doubt. <>Who?¿? 06:39, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Alireza Jafarzadeh tagged by User:Gcashman on 6Jun, just listing it, wikification, sectioning and headings. <>Who?¿? 07:15, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Cybertopia needs formatting, categorizing, wikifying and elaboration from someone who knows what this even is. not me. .. supine 10:35, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Late night, as in late night programming, needs cleanup and wikification...and more information. Sorry about this one. User:Agentstinky 14:06, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Zhan Ziqian needs fact checking and grammar cleanups, and Dong Yuan needs linguistic cleanup and NPOVing. Both are Chinese painters. Neurophyre 02:52, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Fucked Company - Discussion board vanity. - Mike Rosoft 14:11, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)

June 8, 2005

• Dune 7 Grammaratical errors, repetition, clumsily expressed content. Possible candidate for deletion as well? sɪzlæk [ +t, +c ] -->

Brian Herbert's addendum books are not even in his father's league. Delete the article, burn his books and tell him to get out of writing. :) ℬastique▼^talk 15:02, 18 Jun 2005 (UTC)

• Wraith (Stargate) Needs to be sectioned into sub-topics for easier readability, see Talk:Wraith (Stargate) -- Joe Beaudoin Jr. 03:12, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
  • Some Headers added but still requires more JpY - Carpe Aurum 'sieze the gold' 16:03, 14 Jun 2005 (UTC)
    • Well, I virtually redid the article. Here is the current result. -- Joe Beaudoin Jr. 02:55, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Fangirl needs to be edited for clarity. --Misterwindupbird 03:16, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Linda Barnes eval notability of contemp mys. writer; wikify & flesh out, or VfD. - Jerzy·t
• COACH HOWIE VOGTS eval notability; moderate the wikification (!) & split into bio and team articles, or VfD as secondary vanity- Jerzy·t
• Johnny Barnes discover notability (IMO "eccentric" doesn't cut it) of this friendly fellow, or VfD him. --Jerzy·t 07:41, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Pseudo-homosexuality is a short but fuzzy article full of "may", "nebulous", "putatively", "tentatively" and so on. It also drags in Abu Ghraib, sociopathy, Uncle Tom Cobley and all. Pseudo-homosexuality gets about 800 hits, so presumably the term means something; but this article does not seem to give the reader much of a clue as to what that might be. Cleanup, or VfD? -- The Anome 09:10, Jun 8, 2005 (UTC)
• Drum wrench - Badly written. The first sentence (which I have removed) says it all: "Since the beginning of time, drum wrenches have been the envy of all other wrenches." - Mike Rosoft 17:29, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Virtues of Harmony - Article needs to be wikified, sectioned off with headings and possible paraphrasing or condense some of the content, to make the article easier to read and understand. <>Who?¿? 04:24, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC)
  • I did a load of cleaning up, but there are still some small things. Other than that, it's mostly fixed. MessedRocker 02:13, Jun 11, 2005 (UTC)

June 7, 2005

• Template:EU-timeline -- Eugh. MessedRocker 21:01, Jun 7, 2005 (UTC)

There is a much nicer image at Image:EU_Structure_History.png (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:EU_Structure_History.png), but it does not have the links. Can this be fixed? Andreww

• Andries Pretorius - see its tk; evidently the 1911 EB's standards for precision were far lower than i understand ours to be. --Jerzy·t
• Changeling -- User:Exploding Boy has requested a clean-up of this article with the following motivation: the article needs cleaning up to improve layout, writing style (esp: formality) and grammar. A few references wouldn't hurt. The term "fae" needs linking and explaining. Salleman 03:02, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)

June 6, 2005

• Normative legal thought is a simple rant. Some factual information would be appreciated. Tadanisakari 19:08, Jun 5, 2005 (UTC)
• Second Founding is in dire need of cleanup, wikification, contextualization and more. Aecis 15:56, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Reunion (book) sounds more like an ad than an article. Needs some copyediting. Aecis 15:49, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Suzanne La Follette - Not an encyclopedia article, POV. - Mike Rosoft 14:25, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) + Cleaned further; genealogy out to appropriate family article; still a pathetic stub, but her conservative rep may flesh it out; done IMO but since c-u notice was already removed once prematurely, someone else plz make that call Jerzy·t
• Fasting needs fact-checking. In particular, the section relating to Jainism needs attention from someone knowledgable about that faith. Until I checked it yesterday, that section included material on a Jain monk who fasted for a year. Pakaran 13:28, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• ILMT looks suspiciously like original research. Maybe all it needs is some copyediting to make it a little less first-person sounding? --RoySmith 01:46, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC)

June 4, 2005

• Houseplant needs converting from colloquial and prescriptive talk to good prose (I've done some, but it needs more) - MPF 22:21, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Cargolifter was translated from German but with a lack of colloquial understanding. It would be handy when cleaning this up to be able to check the German wikipedia version. (Some of the words were tranlated literally.)
• Katherine Heigl is extremely hard to read, it uses for the most part one or two sentence paragraphs that need to be fixed. Sholtar | talk 00:56, Jun 5, 2005 (UTC)

June 3, 2005

• Roorkee - wikify
  • Did some work, good enough? --KSnortum 15:42, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)
  • Much more wikification needed but I decided not do it since it is thoroughly unsourced and includes many POV remarks. Not qualified to remove those myself and seems no point wikifying an article that needs so much removal in the first place. Splash 01:34, Jun 10, 2005 (UTC)

• Financial intermediaries - wikify & sanity check

• Wally Nelson - wikify & check for copyvio
  • The article has large segments from this site (http://www.sniggle.net/Experiment/index.php?entry=12Sep03&showyear=2003). I can't tell whether the author of the article holds the copyrights to the link. Aecis 09:24, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)

• Montefeltro - paragraphs?
  • Added, still needs some work --KSnortum 16:10, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)
  • Tabbed paragraphs, some punctuation --User:WayneRay 21:00. 11 Jun 2005

• Polar motion - light clean plus check for copyvio?

• Ethnic pornography - was more or less just a skeletal list with an intro sentence - have now explored some topics, but needs much more; this is a big topic of academic, anti-racist and feminist discussion, for example, as well as a very common pornographic genre. However, the article name is a bit of a compromise, and a new title would be good, too. -- The Anome 11:39, Jun 3, 2005 (UTC)

• Animaniacs (video game) - very long winded and mostly unnecessary. --Falcolombardi87 22:33, Jun 3, 2005 (UTC)

June 1, 2005

• William Ross Macdonald - Way too hard to read. Awesome this is the first cleanup nomination for June. MessedRocker 01:19, Jun 2, 2005 (UTC)
  • Did some work (as did others) --KSnortum 15:42, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)

May

May 31, 2005

• Length of an arc. This article needs a lot of work. The formulas need to be checked, some of them are incomplete. There is lots more information to be added.
• Industrial Revolution. This article needs work. There are sections which are well-written and documented, and other sections which are blank or under-written and under-documented. The relationships between the first, second (and perhaps third) Industrial Revolutions are not made clear nor easy to understand; the Talk page is equally confused and could use streamlining. Given the ongoing importance and the relevance of the subject to daily life, including the net and Biocrawler, this is a signifigant article which IMO should be strengthened to feature article status. Right now, it's a source of confusion and uncertainty to any new reader unfamiliar with the subject. Cheers, Madmagic 09:48, May 31, 2005 (UTC)
  • Suggest nominating for article improvement drive. It's an important topic and would probably get some interest. — RJH 22:42, 31 May 2005 (UTC)
• Moomin needs some tweeking and a bit more information - for example the Hobgoblin is not mentioned.
  • There's a hobgoblin in the Moomin books? What is its Swedish or Finnish name? I don't remember ever hearing of such a character. — JIP | Talk 13:33, 22 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• The History of the True Cross - To quote User:Cyrius (who deleted this article previously): apparently meaningful, hopelessly confused - Mike Rosoft 20:35, 31 May 2005 (UTC)

May 30, 2005

• Summary of 9/11 Commission Report - many blank sections. --Tothebarricades.tk 03:05, May 31, 2005 (UTC)
• Kingston Grammar School -- There is no Infobox template for schools, I added an html one, but the formatting is a little whack - descriptive text should nest by the table instead of sitting on top of it. If anyone feels productive they could always make a school infobox :) Cheers. --Inexplicable 16:36, May 30, 2005 (UTC)
• Air Force Security Forces -- formerly a "Deadend" article. I've added wikilinks, but someone with a greater knowledge of US military than I should take a look at this. Soundguy99 19:19, 30 May 2005 (UTC)

May 28, 2005

• Clarendon, Jamaica -- needs wikification
  • done Zeimusu | (Talk page)
• Felix Sabates - not an encyclopedia article, unwikified. - Mike Rosoft 12:10, 28 May 2005 (UTC)
  • added wikilinks, corrected spelling and grammar. Article still needs headings and categories. Gbeeker 21:55, 31 May 2005 (UTC)
• Piero Sraffa - it is a ding-danged mess - Echeneida
• John Langley - needs a major cleanup. - To0n
  • partially done Mga 16:47, 29 May 2005 (UTC)
• Tremors has been turned from a Biocrawler article to a piece of fannish gushing - except that the gusher added a lot of info, so I can't just revert it. He also created a page for Tremors character Earl Bassett, which is again full of fannish gushing, and is likewise in need of fixing. DS 12:19, 29 May 2005 (UTC)

May 27, 2005

• Ezmlm - substub, but after a little investigation seems to be a fairly notable subject that could benefit from NPOV and a lot more information Barneyboo 08:33, 27 May 2005 (UTC)
• Jatt - Right now this article is a substub. A lot more can probably be said about this subject. Aecis 07:54, 27 May 2005 (UTC)
• Metalcore - I've tried (at least) cleaning up the article a month ago. I've just looked at it, and wow, what a huge disaster. Both the formatting and the article's content needs a lot of rework. --Jivi 05:08, 27 May 2005 (UTC)
• Tai Anderson (Third Day Band Member), David Carr (Third Day Band Member), Brad Avery (Third Day Band Member), Mark Lee (Third Day Band Member), and Mac Powell (Third Day Band Member). Vanity articles. - Mike Rosoft 07:43, 27 May 2005 (UTC)
• List_of_Field_Marshals has been found to erroneously include persons who are/were never made Field Marshal. I've cleaned up a few but there are probably more incorrect entries. Julius.kusuma 12:43, 27 May 2005 (UTC)
• San Juan del Sur - tourism advertisement. - Mike Rosoft 14:17, 27 May 2005 (UTC)
• Education#Challenges in education - Reads much like a personal essay. Partially trivial, partially POV. Might be heavily pruned. Deserves attention, since Education is quite a major subject. / Alarm 23:22, 27 May 2005 (UTC)

May 26, 2005

• Kaimingye Disease Weapon Attack - Needs a general cleanup Bluap 14:27, 26 May 2005 (UTC)
• Poznanski Szybki Tramwaj - Lead needs cleanup. Aecis 14:49, 26 May 2005 (UTC)

Correction: the entire article needs a cleanup. Aecis 14:57, 26 May 2005 (UTC)

• ?????? (Pokémon glitch) - Yeah, I cleaned this one up to the best standard I could. I got rid of the table, and just made it into a 'simple' stud article. - by a non-registered user (20:42 UTC)
• Dan Emmett appears to have suffered an erroneous merge (into it) of what may have been, or probably should be, all or part of an article like Origins of minstrelsy, Minstrelsy, or Minstrel. I haven't looked into the page history or the two existing articles; if this calls for admin powers to achieve a reasonable arrangement of the info, let me know & i'll help if you're not too anxious to wait for action. (Don't do cut-and-paste moves, or merges that leave page histories behind!) --Jerzy·t

May 24, 2005

• Ceremonial mace - Needs to be organized and presented in a more article-like fashion. Some headings, an introduction, etc.
• Electrowinning - Perhaps a dump from elsewhere?

May 23, 2005

• Cashmere wool - doesn't follow any standard. Needs a general cleanup, full sentences etc. --Vikingstad 13:57, May 23, 2005 (UTC)
  • - Article has been cleaned up and sentence and structure have been incorporated. If anything else needs to be done, i might help again

--Brookshawn 20:47 May 23, 2005 (UTC)

• Criticism of the Federal Reserve -- The first section has a lot of POV staments and needs neutrality and better syntax. I fixed up what I could (at this hour) but it needs some editing in specific knowledge that I don't have. Telso 08:03, 24 May 2005 (UTC)

May 22, 2005

• Wikiportal/Music - nobody makes any changes on that portal, I think this portal is absolutely useless. There are two music portals - Wikiportal/Music and Biocrawler:Wikiportal/Music.
• hub - this disambiguation page needs a bit of help... i've done a lot of work on it already. there is a reference to computer games, which i'm not sure is relevant or true, also a reference to propellors that i'm unsure of. on a related topic, computer networking device needs a lot of organization. --Drolldurham

• • I believe that the propellor reference is correct. --kjkolb

May 19, 2005

• Vivekananda survey - Unencylopedaic. I don't even know what it's supposed to be. --Tothebarricades.tk 22:42, May 20, 2005 (UTC)
• List of investment bankers - Poorly-formatted. — Phil Welch
• José Maria de Zalvidea - Apparently a direct translation from Catholic Encyclopedia. Sarge Baldy 17:18, May 19, 2005 (UTC)
• Hastings Lionel Ismay, 1st Baron Ismay - The biography is simply a list of important dates. Mackensen (talk) 19:25, 19 May 2005 (UTC)
• Midwestern African American Wiccan Name for God - This needs some significant cleanup and should probably be renamed, but I don't know the first thing about the subject. NatusRoma 23:31, 19 May 2005 (UTC)
  • Since Wicca didn't exist until the middle of 20th century, I don't think this article can be salvaged. - Mike Rosoft 20:36, 28 May 2005 (UTC)
  • I have nominated the article for deletion. - Mike Rosoft 20:37, 31 May 2005 (UTC)
• Chakra - The section on "scientific basis" has been retouched by an anonymous user. Needs fact-checking, but correct punctuation and text refactoring would be a start. --Pablo D. Flores 02:50, 20 May 2005 (UTC)

May 17, 2005

• Barneys New York - for some reason, the title of the article is "Barneys New york" with a lower-case "y." It needs to be changed to all upper-case. I don't know how this is done, though.
  • All you have to do is click the "move" tab on the top of the page, which I just went ahead and did. sɪzlæk [ +t, +c ] 01:01, May 18, 2005 (UTC)
• Jay Mariotti - Promotional, does not establish notability.
• Case Yorke and related pages - Vanity.
• Furniture Today - Spam.
• Spun - Unwikified, badly written article about a film. - Mike Rosoft 17:45, 17 May 2005 (UTC)
  • Appears to have been brought up to a more acceptable standard. Denni☯ 00:14, 2005 May 20 (UTC)

Why do all the pages keep on disappearing? Makes it hard to update them.

May 16, 2005

• Diffuse knapweed - seems to have been adapted from a school essay; needs wikification, copy editing, pictures. Quercus 20:04, 16 May 2005 (UTC)
• The Best Page in the Universe - dial back from fancruft to encyclopedic coverage. --Jerzy~Jerzy - one user has removed the cleanup notice, made a bunch of changes, asked me what i thot, made more changes, all w/o discussing here. I've given this ten times the effort i intended, and my interest is too slight to read it again to see the effect of F'rG's latest. Anyone else? --Jerzy·t
• Araña is once again becoming a complete mess. The plot synopsis is bloated and convoluted, there's loads of HTML code in there, and atrocious spelling and grammar. --Pc13 09:58, 2005 May 16 (UTC)

The lists of encyclopedia topics could do with renumbering.

Why had all the entries from 8 May to present "vanished"?

May 15, 2005

• Lara Roxx - needs references which document that she got HIV from Darren James, or leaves us open to a lawsuit. RickK 21:18, May 15, 2005 (UTC)

• FairTax - needs significant work on NPOV and in some cases spelling as well. Pakaran 02:18, 16 May 2005 (UTC)
  • I've taken a first pass at this one. Have a look.--Unfocused 03:23, 20 May 2005 (UTC)
    • This article has been attacked by POV pushers in favor of it. It requires far more attention than I can give it. --Unfocused 06:20, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC)

• Words hardest to translate - I fixed the grammar up a little bit and tried to organize the page, but it seems to be about two different things. First, it talks about a list of words named "Words hardest to translate," by a British company. Then later, it leaves that topic to talk about specific difficulties in translation and also a small note about certain that are easy to translate. Maybe it should be divided into two articles, one about the list and another about problems in translation. FuzzyOnion 22:49, May 15, 2005 (UTC)

• Infantilism - Horrible article with way too many sections, some of which are useless, and section 'A list of known abusers on the net' is definitely not encyclopedia material. Biocrawler is not a campaign ground regardless of issue. - Mithent 15:34, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

• So the list is a bit out of line, but the complexity of ABDL and Infantilism is extensive. We have cleaned it up before and deleted certain sections. But if you have not read the whole article, you can not say it is a horrible article. And which sections would be useless may I ask? Read the whole article and then we can debate what needs to be cleaned up, but I doubt you know very much about ABDL yourself. --OrbitOne 16:02, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

We have removed the suggested section regarding known abusers as per your suggestion, as well as many of the sections that we believed might not be necessary. Your input is appreciated. If there are any other specific suggestions you might have, they would be appreciated. Meanwhile we have removed the Cleanup notice. Thanks for your interest and advice on this article.

Scott P. 16:22, May 15, 2005 (UTC)

Well, generally I was referring to the organisation in the article - it's informative, certainly, but it has a huge number of sections, some of which are extremely short. Most are only one paragraph long, and I feel that merging such things as 'Loss of Power' elsewhere would be a good idea. There's some description of splitting the article on the Talk page, and I think that might also be a good idea. I don't really know about ABDL, no. I'll be quiet about this now and leave it to your own editing. -- Mithent 16:29, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

Thankyou for your understanding. We will try to clean up sections, but I have plans about expanding loss of power. I might make it into an article of its own in relation to sexual slavery fantasy. --OrbitOne 16:38, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

May 11, 2005

• Dancing Eagle - looks like a candidate for deletion even.. meh. Yorick, Jester of Elsinore 11:53, 2005 May 12 (UTC)
  • we ought to create a Segal, Daniel Scott article and redirect Dancing Eagle to that --Drolldurham
• History of the Balkans - was COTW, enormous amounts of text were added but some sections are still blank, and what is already there could probably use colloborative editing. --Tothebarricades.tk 19:37, May 11, 2005 (UTC)
• Shrivel - combination stub/disambiguation/extended dictdef. page that also needs wikification. --Dcfleck 00:24, 2005 May 12 (UTC)

Parts of this were so badly written they may have been a joke (DiHyrdogen oxide...instead of saying water?). I threw away a lot of junk. Now it may need some expansion. RJFJR 01:43, May 12, 2005 (UTC)

May 10, 2005

• Soulcake - chunk of text written in the first person followed by another (unwikified) chunk of text cut and pasted from [2] (http://www.takeourword.com/Issue020.html). (It's credited, but may still be a copyright issue.)

May 9, 2005

• Sequence points - unwikified, unencylopedaic. --Tothebarricades.tk 01:12, May 10, 2005 (UTC)

I've merged this with Sequence point, clarified and prettied it up a bit, but may need further work. Stoive 23:03, 13 May 2005 (UTC)

• RPGFan. Needs a lot of expansion. RPGFan has a rather lengthy and interesting history as far as RPG websites go. I'd do it myself, but I don't think I could provide a NPOV. --Kweee 16:58, 9 May 2005 (UTC)

My suggestion is to try your best with it. NPOV can be worked on by anyone, but substantially fewer can add any information. --Tothebarricades.tk 01:12, May 10, 2005 (UTC)

• Ternary plot. Needs stylish polish. Statistics 09:53, 9 May 2005 (UTC)

• Politics of Nepal. Contains CIA Factbook information, much of which is probably duplicated at Nepal. --Smack (talk) 04:24, 9 May 2005 (UTC)

• Ombra mai fù - I almost marked this as patent nonsense, but it turns out this sloppy mess is an opera by Georg Friedrich Handel. Someone with the time and inclination to fix it up, please? DS 20:00, 9 May 2005 (UTC)
  • Actually, it's not a Handel opera itself; it's an aria from Handel's opera Serse which makes it less encyclopedic than it would be if it were an opera itself. Also, the plot as described in this entry does not match the plot listed at Serse. --Metropolitan90 22:30, May 10, 2005 (UTC)
  • Just did what little I could to it; at least now it's stub-tagged properly. Soundguy99 03:45, 11 May 2005 (UTC)

May 8, 2005

• Template:h2g2 needs to be rewritten by someone who knows the arcane wikitax. --Smack (talk) 05:38, 8 May 2005 (UTC)

• Barbamon - it's a Digimon. I bet a VfD on it wouldn't succeed, because we have so much of this junk, but something needs to be done with this badly-written stub. RSpeer 06:51, May 8, 2005 (UTC)

• Hualapai -- needs to be in complete sentences and conform to Biocrawler standards. Exabyte (talk)­ 21:44, May 8, 2005 (UTC)

May 7, 2005

• Religious violence could use some attention. I've attempted to NPOV it by removing the small subset of specific examples and writing a proper introduction, but I feel that ultimately this article will need specific examples to achieve it's purpose as well. Please see Talk:Religious violence for more on this topic. Any attention paid to this article would be appreciated. -SocratesJedi | Talk 01:28, 7 May 2005 (UTC)

May 6, 2005

• Stormtrooper effect - A very poorly written article

  -Rewrote it. May have been too link-happy.

• Archos needs a lot of serious editing. Bad grammar, confusing sentence fragments, and little if any information on the company (the article focuses more on the products vice the company itself). --Mitsukai 05:06, 6 May 2005 (UTC)
  • I've done some formatting and revision to help with the points of confusion; expansion points are outlined on the Talk page here so feel free to point out a few ideas. --Orethrius van Degaurde 05:56, 6 May 2005 (UTC)

May 5, 2005

• Joseon Dynasty needs serious editing. Bad grammar, inaccurate information, and irrelevant information. --thevizier 21:26, 5 May 2005 (UTC)
  • I've taken a whack at several of the sections. I haven't stepped into any accuracy stuff, and several sections remained, but I did a good deal of revising. I moved comments on the article to the talk page, by the way, which is where they're more appropriate. Demi ^T/_C 00:10, 2005 May 6 (UTC)
• El Topo - needs npov cohesion 08:38, May 5, 2005 (UTC)
  • Removed non-NPOV praise, leaving not much. Article is in great need of expansion. Demi ^T/_C 08:29, 2005 May 7 (UTC)
• Can opener - needs loving care to include more styles of opener, per Talk:Can opener. (More pix & a drawing also welcome.) --Jerzy (t) 03:21, 2005 May 5 (UTC)
• Jerry Dunphy - this article needs a boost. one sentence? no, de ninguna manera. --fpo 02:45, May 5, 2005 (UTC)
  • I fleshed it out a bit; unsure if it should be removed from cleanup, though. MichaelCaricofe 05:54, 6 May 2005 (UTC)
• Napoleonic Wars - contains a lot of confusing sentence fragments, undeveloped points. --Tothebarricades.tk 00:54, May 5, 2005 (UTC)
• Brinksmanship
  • I tried to make it better and removed the clean-up tag. Wempain 01:34, 15 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• Coincidence could do with some expansion - I have given an example (which can be moved elsewhere if appropriate).Jackiespeel 23:16, 5 May 2005 (UTC)
  • That entry more appropriate for the dictionary than the encyclopedia. Is it possible to move entries between them? Dreamingkat 01:42, 10 May 2005 (UTC)

May 3, 2005

• Scottish English needs a bunch of cleanup
• Welsh English needs a bunch of cleanup
• Scouse - Needs a lot of cleanup.
• Lens space - much verbage and math, no meaning.
• TRIZ - mass of red and external links, part of 20 vague categories and I have no idea exactly what it is supposed to be about --the wub (talk) 12:51, 3 May 2005 (UTC)
• Maxam - needs wikification, possibly NPOV. Reads like a company advertisement. --Redattack34 22:19, May 3, 2005 (UTC)
• Reverend Gibbs - Wikification and cleanup of language I think. - Mark 02:42, 4 May 2005 (UTC)

May 2, 2005

• Omnipotence paradox - often vague and unencyclopedic, rife with grammar and spelling mistakes, and confusedly organized (though I think the "pop culture" section is fantastic) Anville 14:41, 2 May 2005 (UTC)
• Regulatory regions - Needs lots of work - grammar, style, etc Tiefighter 13:07, 2 May 2005 (UTC)
  • Took a stab at it, but I'm no biochemist. Please expand and fact-check. --KSnortum 04:31, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC)
• William A. Patterson - Some transcript and quotes, not an article. Copyvio? Mgm|^(talk) 10:40, May 2, 2005 (UTC)
• List of cruise ships - I'm not sure if this is the right place to ask for help with standardizing article titles for ships. Please contact me to discuss the issue. Thanks! -Etoile 16:13, 2 May 2005 (UTC)
• Kofuku no Kagaku - I cleaned this up a little, but once it goes into their teachings and prophecies about continents sinking left and right and aliens (with different concepts of property) returning, I just don't know enough about the subject material to do a whole lot with it. Is anyone familiar with this stuff? It could probably use some NPOVing, too. -- Captain Disdain 16:28, 2 May 2005 (UTC)
• Rasht - needs copyediting to improve the flow of English. Also has a section on a village whose relationship to the main subject is very unclear. --Dcfleck 01:02, 2005 May 3 (UTC)
  • I rewrote most of it except for that village section Dreamingkat 00:27, 11 May 2005 (UTC)
• Hyper generalized orthogonal Lie algebra — I don't know if this page has been listed before — it's had a {{cleanup}} tag on it for about 5 months - but it's a disaster. It looks like somebody's math notes, possibly with some un-noticed vandalism interspersed. --Dcfleck 12:00, 2005 May 3 (UTC)

May 1, 2005

• Sudha Shenoy - extremely vague, needs lots of wikification Vagab 17:18, 1 May 2005 (UTC)
• George Schuyler - extremely vague, need lots of working Vagab 17:18, 1 May 2005 (UTC)
• synth rock - needs lots of work

discussion moved to article's talk page

• White bread - needs some US-centric statements altering or removing

April

• Pax Britannica to Pax Americana Definitely needs to be looked at. Not sure if it's a VfD candidate, but it's certainly POV, possibly original research/copyvio, and definitely needs to be moved to a more general article about Britain, the US, or the world in general. saturnight 23:47, Apr 30, 2005 (UTC)
  • Should probably be merged in article about superpower nations. As a stand-alone article, it feels more like an essay than an article.--Mitsukai 12:57, 3 May 2005 (UTC)

April 29, 2005

• Box_office_bomb - This list needs to be all table format or all list format -- Cmulgrew
  • Unless you are looking at a different list than I am, it looks like all table format to me. --Woohookitty 20:19, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)
    • In Fact I edited the page and put all data into tables last friday --Deathmaster9 01 May 2005
• Zion I - barely a stub worth of info about the rap group, and the album information should probably be put in separate pages or formatted differently. --Howrealisreal 02:56, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)
  • I started the cleanup of it. It's a bit better now MessedRocker 04:25, Apr 30, 2005 (UTC)
• eGovernment - totally unreadable
  • I added a bunch of tags, including cleanup and cleanup-verify. This might be a candidate for complete rewrite too if someone wants to add that tag. It's a mess. --Woohookitty 20:37, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)
• List_of_Mexico_City_metro_stations - Could somebody experienced please re-arrange the layout of the images? I tried but drove me nuts... Rune Welsh
  • I added attention and cleanup tags. I will TRY to sort out the pictures, but I'm afraid only a nuclear bomb will do. ;-) --Woohookitty 22:36, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)
• Yu Yu Hakusho Episode summaries - I processed this in VfD/old. No consensus to delete, but definitely needs help. Mackensen (talk) 04:41, 30 Apr 2005 (UTC)
• Boy (book) - Uses "you", "I think", and too much subjective interpretation. Nightwatch
  • I've really cleaned it up, but I'm still leaving the cleanup tag in just in case it could have more improvement. MessedRocker 14:41, Apr 30, 2005 (UTC)
  • I'll remove the tag. I added the ISBN info and shortened it a bit. --Woohookitty 22:38, 30 Apr 2005 (UTC)

April 26, 2005

• Water fluoridation - this is an important topic, but the article needs a lot of work. --Brendanfox 13:01, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)
• Clarabell Lansing - Is there anything notable about this person besides the manner of her death?
  • No, but the matter of her death is still pretty notable. They named a garden after her, so that's of worth. -- user:zanimum

April 25, 2005

• Poverty cycle
  • Took a whack at it. Looks like a good start now. Scott Ritchie 10:43, 18 May 2005 (UTC)

April 24, 2005

• Morehead Scholarship - looks like a brochure, not an article.
  • I've done a fair bit of work, but there's still a lot to be done Bluap 11:41, 29 Apr 2005 (UTC)
• Information broker copyright violation?
  • Gack! Referred to Biocrawler:Cleanup Taskforce · Katefan0^(scribble) 17:06, Apr 29, 2005 (UTC)
• Crystal ch